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Posts: 206 (07/08/09 03:37:13) Moderator |
C'mere and let me
feel the pulse deep within that neck and oh yes the scent of an intoxicating life flowing within Just one taste will send me over the e d g e 
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Posts: 1497 (07/08/09 05:09:15) ~ Moderator ~ |
Wonderful piece! Dark and seductive! Very well written!
All the best,
Jay DL  Visit me at,  |
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Posts: 358 (07/10/09 12:30:42) |
Indigoleaves ,
Seductively dark and delightful !!! Enjoyed !!! DWG |
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Posts: 11164 (09/09/09 15:14:00) Friendly Musings Writer |
Short but seductive and says so much.
Dark and beautiful, loved it! 
~MOON TEARS~ Fiercest is the bark of the wolf in the fight. Lonesome is the cry in the dark of the night. The bark draws blood and the cry a tune, the two combined draw tears from the moon. © April 7, 2006 Karen Davies |
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Posts: 5 (10/01/09 15:37:44) |
This was hot! A great write!
hugs 
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