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angels4moms4	Desire	Lead	[-]
Posts: 421 (07/05/09 16:48:35) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	It is like, the fire that burns in my soul. It is the past, realm for watch I long for. For it calls, upon the heart,of my very soul. Here, I lost my wings, one must walk. As night, descends one can hear voices. As the voices, come closer and closer, they cry out. And, they pray, for the Creator and more. Here, the flesh and the bone time is running out. Here, life is full of, hate and anger pain sorrow. In, the realm of past time is far greater. See, the desire, to be with, the Creator, is far more. Each day, as it comes fourth, I long for it, more and more. As I pray, for all and more, time is alwmost here. See, the hour class, is almost empty, grain by grain.
MrLeslie		#1	[-]
Posts: 136 (07/08/09 03:52:47) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	An extremely emotional piece of poetic word. So full of strength and truth. Yes indeed! The hourglass of each of us, has the sand running out in ever increasing speed. A strong write indeed! Well done! MrLeslie. http://p200.ezboard.com/baspiringpoets"
angels4moms4		#2	[-]
Posts: 422 (07/09/09 15:45:50) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Mrleslie, Thank, you for your kind words. May the Creator be with you always and forever. Marie
Willowdown		#3	[-]
Posts: 1164 (07/09/09 23:14:18) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	you seem to be exploring a darker side of your personality again i like this piece
angels4moms4		#4	[-]
Posts: 423 (07/20/09 14:39:14) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Willowdown, Thank, you for your kind words. May, the Creator, be with you always and forever. Marie.
Cottagerose		#5	[-]
Posts: 4350 (07/26/09 09:36:35) Friendly Musings Writer Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Hi Maria, Death is a promise. Many of us are reaching its door faster than we would like. Your poem on this subject is tender however, as if dying is not something you fear. Sylvia
angels4moms4		#6	[-]
Posts: 424 (07/26/09 17:29:05) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Cottagerose, Thank, you for your kind words. Death, is not what I fear at all?.. May, the Creator, be with you always and forerver. Marie.

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