The wishing well, is empty, have we used?, it up for dreams.
As we wish, upon a stare, for they are gone to, or just as well.
Have, we done all what, The Creator, has asked us for?
Has time consumed us with hate?, as well anger and pain.
Now, the fight of our lives, is here and more.
Here, I lost my wings one must walk.
The tears, that full from my face, are more than I can bear.
The pain, that I feel is anger and sorrow.
Here, it is all that I can do,is watch and listen pray.
We see all and hear all and more.
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Posts: 4325 (06/27/09 08:27:37) Friendly Musings Writer |
That is all we can do when tears flow and we are
left looking and wondering what to do with this feeling. We just pray. God bless. sylvia
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Cottagerose, Thank you, for your kind words.
May the Creator be with always and forever. Marie.
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Nice piece very well written!
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Apocolyptic undertones here, I feel. Prayer, for sure can have a positive effect. But most of the World's ills can be ascribed to people simply not
learning from past mistakes. I hare your concerns.
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A Beautiful Poem and Challenge.
"Have, we done all what, The Creator, has asked us for? Has time consumed us with hate?, as well anger and pain. Now, the fight of our lives, is here and more." It's so easy to be influenced by the media and our failings. But if we just keep playing to the music of our Heart. Time will surely tell. |
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Posts: 417 (07/05/09 15:07:36) |
Deathletter, Thank you, for your kind words.
May the Creator, be with you always and forever Marie.
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Mothman muse, Thank you, for your kind words.
May the Creator, be with you always and forever. Marie.
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Poetic Paul, Thank you, for your kind words.
May the Creator be with you always and forever. Marie.
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