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Mothman Muse

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Posts: 56

(05/26/09 08:25:23)

the Spirit Within

inside the womb
we created this
whatever amounts
to truth

the focus of our senses

revealing without proof

those connetions 2
our deepest feelings

found again
in this long
lost friend
this thyme

This heart
Thinking,
Feeling.
connected 2

the momemtum
of this Earth

...

those passions

reconecting to all senses

that higher love

Last Edited By: Twilight Myst 05/30/09 06:22:02. Edited 1 time.

Cottagerose

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Posts: 4297

(05/27/09 04:02:23)

Friendly Musings Writer

I think that we do have knowledge of emotions and perhaps more
inside our brains when we are born. I have always believed babies
hear and learn before they are born. That's sort of scary considering
where some kids have been! Lots to think about in your write. Sylvia

Deathletter

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(05/28/09 05:04:55)

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Wonderful piece! Very well written!

All the best,
Jay DL

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PoeticPaul

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Posts: 3180

(05/28/09 07:32:35)

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A wonderful synopsis of Spring. Indeed. it's the season of regeneration, not to mention freshness. Nice pithy piece and enjoyable read.

Best wishes,

Paul

DarkwingGoth2002

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(05/28/09 16:56:12)

Mothmanmuse,

This speaks on many levels about emotions and our sense to it...Brava !!!

Twilight Myst

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(05/30/09 06:23:51)

'Myst in Moonlight'
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What an excellent
piece this is MM...
Wonderful writing!!

Mothman Muse

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Twilight Myst

A white flower

grows in quietness

Let your tongue

become that flower...

Bogrem

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Posts: 160

(05/30/09 09:15:29)

Excellent job-
and congrats on your award!!

Mothman Muse

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(06/26/09 04:59:19)

Thanks for your input Sylvia. I've come to believe we have infinite choices at every fork in our collective roads (souls).
And eventually, all roams lead to our Heart.

Thanks Jay, Paul, Darkwing and Bogrem. Appreciate any input I get on my bizzare, dreamlike poetry.

Thanks so much Twilight Myst. I had these three poems that were two and became one. Anyway, I'm glad you
liked it.

Inspired greatly by Robert Moss (The Three Only Things)

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