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 RGarfield |
Free Verse Challenge |
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Posts: 4010 (08/03/08 04:57:24) |
Your favourite peave. Please write a poem about the thing or event or whatever peaves you the most.
as usual max ten words per line max 20 lines one poem per poet per challenge |
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RestlessBeauty |
and Along Comes that Tune | ||||
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Posts: 25402 (08/03/08 19:13:31)
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Oh that damned itching, on my arms and heart,
must be stress, yes that has to be it, I definately know its not about him, cause beside the itch, I'd be spitting. Its so bloody annoying hearing a song you'd forgotten, now the memories are setting up home again, it would be different if it still wasn't so bitter, or I didnt remember how much you flittered and feigned. No, its just after 10 years, and no sound from you, never see any of your onscreen names, so thats pretty cut and dried with it, do it pronto, get it overwith, so nothing remains the same. And so I did, then that song trickling along my neck, finding my heart, but I'll be damned to open one fricking pore, to let any one word try to work its old time magic,those days are gone, and truly in good riddence riding that dark horse tune through my brain, like a steel spike hitting its mark. 
 
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Posts: 4012 (08/04/08 01:20:19) |
again RB first off the mark with an excellant write. Though I shoulda guessed your favourite peave.
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Posts: 25408 (08/06/08 23:29:53)
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lol.. well i dont usually do these.. and seems summer has claimed the competitive souls of many... and riddence? isnt it a instead of an e?
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moonchild8 |
Boredom~ | ||||
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Posts: 11159 (08/08/08 10:28:14) Friendly Musings Writer |
~BOREDOM~ The brain on boredom turns to whoredom with a flirt and a flip of the skirt. An air through the head blows brain cells dead and thoughts multiplied become noise amplified. The brain on boredom multiplies the sum of brain cells on a rocket ship to insanities slip, across the nerves in a redundant swerve of incessant chatter of an idle matter and the fact becomes fatter until the membrane splatters. The brain on boredom makes intelligence dumb with a twirl of the thumbs making memory numb until words rehearsed mirror madness in reverse. © 2008 Karen Davies 
~MOON TEARS~ Fiercest is the bark of the wolf in the fight. Lonesome is the cry in the dark of the night. The bark draws blood and the cry a tune, the two combined draw tears from the moon. © April 7, 2006 Karen Davies |
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Posts: 25414 (08/08/08 12:29:03)
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must be whats wrong with my kids in school... lol.. good one Karen !!!!
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RGarfield |
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Posts: 4016 (08/13/08 02:05:30) |
Karen, this a very nice entry.
it will be a close call for top honours. reads and flows well and quite nicely carries to content to its conclussion |
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Jim AKA RapidFire |
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Posts: 2316 (10/24/08 18:17:15) |
Nothing irks me more than blantant stupidty,
well nothing except maybe laziness too. But when those two things are combined, It simply drives me totally hog-wild. In public bathrooms, as a matter of fact, where some don't recognize a trash can from the floor. Or that toilet paper doesn't belong in the toilet, just give it a toss let it fall anywhere. Then there are those with a very poor aim, and too lazy or stupid to know you should flush. I'd just love to take a charged up cattle prod, and see how they look with it up their tush.......
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Posts: 25562 (10/25/08 12:07:29)
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hahaha... Jimmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Jim AKA RapidFire |
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Posts: 2319 (10/28/08 23:39:55) |
Thanks RB, just a pet peeve of mine. LOL
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RGarfield |
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Posts: 4025 (02/28/09 18:29:28) |
nice one Jim. I have been in the hospital again and am just now able to get back to my computer.
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