Here's my first attempt at a cinquain...

sustenance
you speak
i lean closer
no matter that your words
have no meaning to anyone
but you
my love
keeps me hanging
onto and sucking in
every pointless sentance that you
breathe out
~sailingonby~

you speak
i lean closer
no matter that your words
have no meaning to anyone
but you
my love
keeps me hanging
onto and sucking in
every pointless sentance that you
breathe out
~sailingonby~
