Hi Janmew,

your verse echoes the immersiveness of Nature. Those too hurried thoughts are submerged in timeless things, as anxieties are given to unweighted wings.
I love the images here, a white fanfare, wingbeats sweep the sky, gull-scream trailing duclet dreams across the feathered twilight.
The soothing of self, overloud thoughts are quieted, suddenly with no want of words.

Here you have penned a serenity, and captured a piece of peace.
I'm very glad I read this one. Thank you.