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Cottagerose

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(05/20/09 23:16:59)

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Sweet Mystery

Night and day you are there in my heart
growing more important as minutes pass

My heart is trembling with deep emotions
my eyes betray my fascination gone wild

Love for you is not new, only discovered
lying in anticipation of a sign of acceptance

My thoughts are on fire with full questions
shall I woo you into the depths of my arms

Or should I leave you a sweet mystery as
I found you?

Sylvia Sammons Spivey
2009

Last Edited By: Twilight Myst 06/30/09 05:48:22. Edited 1 time.

PoeticPaul

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(05/21/09 02:32:05)

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Hi Sylvia,

Now that is a conundrum! Sometimes the anticipation and expectation is the true element of excitement!.

A very intriguing piece, very succibctly written. Enjoyed immensely.

Best wishes,

Paul

Cottagerose

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(05/21/09 05:47:36)

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Good Morning Paul,

I am delighted that you like the poem.
Thank you for the sweet reply to it.

Always,
Sylvia

Willowdown

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(05/22/09 23:16:39)

i guess the heart dwells more in eternity than mudane hours and minutes...

a fine poem

i'm offline 5 weeks now
catch you when I get back

spongehileray

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(05/23/09 00:11:06)

A heartfelt write, Sylvia. Take care of yourself.

Tom

"I can taste you on my lips and smell you in my clothes." - Butthole Surfers

http://www.myspace.com/tommutchler

Cottagerose

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(05/23/09 03:47:27)

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Hi Willow,

Oh, I think a heart which is an open heart will recognize
the importance of every minute of the present and hope
for the best for the future.

Have a safe and happy trip! Do some more excellent
painting. Sylvia

Cottagerose

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(05/23/09 03:51:23)

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Hi Tom,

You are very kind. I really look forward to feeling
better and I bet it happens. It's just hard to get
through some things.

You always recognize that my poems come from
my heart. Once in a while I slip in something
light and breezy, but I have to force them. I
like them best if they just write while I sit here.

Sylvia

Mothman Muse

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(05/26/09 08:38:18)

Lovin the emotion of this.

...

those passions

reconecting to all senses

that higher love

Cottagerose

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(05/27/09 03:58:57)

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Hi MM,

Thank you for finding the emotions hidden in the simple words.

Sylvia

angels4moms4

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(06/25/09 19:53:32)

Cottagerose, Great words, and Great write.

May The Creator, be with you always and forever.

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Mothman Muse

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(06/26/09 05:14:12)

Glad I caught this again. Hearing more Depth and Sensing more Mystery throughout and within this write.

...

those passions

reconecting to all senses

that higher love

Bogrem

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(06/26/09 10:46:24)

'...should I leave you a sweet mystery...'

wonderful line that-

veeery nice.

Cottagerose

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(06/27/09 08:13:35)

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Hello Maria,

Thank you for the visit and the lovely message.
If not for the every present grace of our Lord
I would not be able to carry on. I send prayers
back to you my friend. Sylvia

Cottagerose

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(06/27/09 08:15:25)

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Hi MM,

Thank you for the second read on this poem.
It is one of those things people guess at, but
the sweet mystery is still just that. My lips are
sealed.

Sylvia

Cottagerose

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(06/27/09 08:17:04)

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Hi Bo,

I'm so pleased you gained something from this simple poem.
It contains a lot of emotions which I suspect you found. I
like knowing that you enjoyed a special line. Sylvia