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Posts: 2 (06/26/08 14:09:17) |
Saddened by
It is here Unfortanate how
It is gone Regrettable that
It is demolished Inopportune when
It is compromised Infelicitous why
It is hopeless,
Sorrow is the name of the alone.
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Posts: 762 (06/26/08 21:16:14) |
this is fairly bleak...
I hope things improve for you! |
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Twilight Myst |
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Posts: 14685 (06/27/08 07:43:14)
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A sorrowful piece!! Welcome to Friendly Musings...
A white flower grows in quietness Let your tongue become that flower...
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RestlessBeauty |
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Posts: 25272 (06/27/08 08:07:55)
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not sure its the personal.. but its written from a point of knowing this kind of degression.. !!
 
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Posts: 279 (06/27/08 08:17:28) |
It is a true thought that has become a cliche, but every blessing does come with a curse. Loneliness is commonly perceived as such, but a blessing must be near
at all times, even if it is not obvious. To me it means having been offered an opportunity to contemplate many matters - involuntary at first, but unstoppable
later. Gaining awareness does not tend to provide a lot of material to make good conversation and usually sets the aware even more apart from those who have
common awareness (conditioning), but it becomes a matter of choice to opt for a life that saturated with awareness, often because such a state of mind gives
plenty of argument to continue to walk the lone trail. Thank you for creating and sharing. I enjoyed being on this page to read and ponder.
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kerntyack |
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Posts: 3 (06/27/08 08:21:28) |
Ah, yeah, as with most of my poems, they're situations I've never encountered, but if I had, maybe it's how I would react. Seeing as my emotions
are constantly towards the unhappy side of things, the situations rarely are fortunate for anyone, like end-of-the-world scenarios.
 However, sometimes things do end up happy in my poems. Also, they may be
influenced by songs, movies, books, or even other poems. Finally, thanks to all of you, and thanks for the welcome! 
Sorrow is the name of the alone.
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Posts: 25276 (06/27/08 17:36:58)
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.......and welcome to FM !!!! *smile*
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kerntyack |
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Posts: 5 (06/27/08 18:19:12) |
Ah, yes, I did get on here recently. I started posting on Authorsden, but uh... I ran out of space a little too quick (not that I've filled it). When
people were posting positive things, I told Macabre, a friend from a game, and he told me to post on here! So, here I am. www.authorsden.com/kerntyack for
those of you who want to see this poem and nine others. I think it will stay that way, because I like this place.
Sorrow is the name of the alone.
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