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Twilight Myst

Sometimes~ (Must Read Award)

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Posts: 14573

(05/04/08 08:53:09)

'Myst in Moonlight'
~Administrator~

Sometimes

I want to run down the streets
screaming like a mad woman
Kicking everything that is
living, and beautiful
out of my sight...

Shouting, up to the heavens
with tears, breathless from
exhaustion that forces
reality, yet still causes those
why, why,
why...

Until crumbled down to the
curb like a trampled leaf
face cupped in hands
waiting for a tomorrow
to bring me those

sunshine promises of acceptance...

And the knowing, the knowing

I cannot, ever, bring you back...

So let today be that day I'll go running,
running down the street like a mad woman
Where the world steps aside, while I show
'control' is not the only thing I've lost...

© Twilight Myst
May 4th, 2008

Last Edited By: RestlessBeauty 05/05/08 16:52:53. Edited 4 times.

RestlessBeauty

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Posts: 25081

(05/04/08 10:36:22)

'Fac meam diem'

~*~EZ OP~*~

wowzer.. filled with such deep emotion.. i definately felt myself pulled into these questions and this role as a woman... brava !!

The Must Read for today!!

Twilight Myst

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Last Edited By: Twilight Myst 05/05/08 06:58:33. Edited 1 times.

PoeticRaine

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Posts: 579

(05/04/08 12:21:56)

I understand completely!
Perfectly penned Twi, seriously.

~ Rox

Tlainya

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Posts: 5866

(05/04/08 13:30:04)

'Music is love in search of a word'
~Moderator~

Intense emotion running through this Twi, well done!

"I will only complicate you./Trust in me and fall as well.
I will find a center in you./I will chew it up and leave,
I will work to elevate you/just enough to bring you down."

LostInEternity99

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Posts: 628

(05/04/08 17:24:09)

Until crumbled down to the
curb like a trampled leaf
face cupped in hands
waiting for a tomorrow
to bring me those

sunshine promises of acceptance...

Incredibly emotional, Twi....I mean, I can't even begin to explain how much. *sigh*

(((hugs)))

Rick

Willowdown

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Posts: 735

(05/04/08 20:33:21)

ah but you know the old saying...

you can run but you cannot hide

believe me, I've tried both...

RGarfield

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Posts: 3919

(05/04/08 21:14:08)

Twi, when running produces words like these, I say RUN more but remember you have friends who will run with you

RG
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trinimade

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Posts: 170

(05/04/08 23:06:45)

Feeling the pain Twilight... have walked that road... but come tomorrow you will stand tall and move forward.

Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely,

Maryse.

DarkDreamer7

Sometimes

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Posts: 1481

(05/04/08 23:26:42)

Hey Twilight. This is full-on beautiful, even the pain. Enjoyed.
Yours,
Dark

Click on pic to see my newest book, "Of Beauty Lost II: how full my heart"

or visit me at The Dark Dreamer's Lair

RestlessBeauty

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Posts: 25095

(05/05/08 15:00:10)

'Fac meam diem'

~*~EZ OP~*~

I had to give it this award.. i know where it comes from... and you wrote it well... again brava Mz Twilight, congrats on your MUST READ AWARD!!!

Visit me at

To the end of the earth I search for your face, for the one who laid all of our beauty to waste, threw our hope into hell and our love to the fire, yes I am the one who will crawl thru the fire..

LostInEternity99

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Posts: 635

(05/05/08 18:37:31)

Congratulations, Twilight!

(((hugs)))

Twilight Myst

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Posts: 14587

(05/08/08 07:48:12)

'Myst in Moonlight'
~Administrator~

Many thanks Rb for the
awards and I know you
can relate so well...

A white flower

grows in quietness

Let your tongue

become that flower...

Twilight Myst

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Posts: 14588

(05/08/08 07:50:19)

'Myst in Moonlight'
~Administrator~

Thanks much Rox for your
really kind comment...

A white flower

grows in quietness

Let your tongue

become that flower...

Twilight Myst

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Posts: 14589

(05/08/08 07:51:13)

'Myst in Moonlight'
~Administrator~

Thanks so kindly Tara, and
so good to have you back!!

A white flower

grows in quietness

Let your tongue

become that flower...

Twilight Myst

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Posts: 14590

(05/08/08 07:52:24)

'Myst in Moonlight'
~Administrator~

Many warm thanks Rick
and I know you can feel
the emotions too well...
Thanks again!!

((((hugs))))

A white flower

grows in quietness

Let your tongue

become that flower...

Twilight Myst

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Posts: 14591

(05/08/08 07:53:25)

'Myst in Moonlight'
~Administrator~

Thanks so much Willow,
and your words ring true...

A white flower

grows in quietness

Let your tongue

become that flower...

Twilight Myst

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Posts: 14592

(05/08/08 07:54:49)

'Myst in Moonlight'
~Administrator~

RGarfield wrote:
Twi, when running produces words like these, I say RUN more but remember you have friends who will run with you

This is a really sweet
comment RG and is so
nice to know...
Many thanks!!

A white flower

grows in quietness

Let your tongue

become that flower...

Twilight Myst

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Posts: 14593

(05/08/08 07:56:15)

'Myst in Moonlight'
~Administrator~

trinimade wrote:
Feeling the pain Twilight... have walked that road... but come tomorrow you will stand tall and move forward.

Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely,

Maryse.

Thank you for your kindness Maryse,
and often we move forward even
if we aren't ready... Thanks again!!

A white flower

grows in quietness

Let your tongue

become that flower...

Twilight Myst

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Posts: 14594

(05/08/08 07:57:13)

'Myst in Moonlight'
~Administrator~

A super comment
my Dark friend and
many thanks!!

A white flower

grows in quietness

Let your tongue

become that flower...

Twilight Myst

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Posts: 14595

(05/08/08 07:58:48)

'Myst in Moonlight'
~Administrator~

RestlessBeauty wrote:
I had to give it this award.. i know where it comes from... and you wrote it well... again brava Mz Twilight, congrats on your MUST READ AWARD!!!

Yes, I know you do Rb and again
thanks for the Must Read and
the other award too...
I know you know... thank you!!

A white flower

grows in quietness

Let your tongue

become that flower...

Twilight Myst

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Posts: 14596

(05/08/08 07:59:57)

'Myst in Moonlight'
~Administrator~

Thanks so much again Rick,
you are always so sweet!!

((((hugs))))

A white flower

grows in quietness

Let your tongue

become that flower...

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